good job! yeah zippers are annoying

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wow good job!! i've tried to do Kingdom hearts characters... but they were no good... This is great though! excellent!

very nice..but again like your other pictures...colouring is a must...

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awsome work

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if i wasnt so cool i would be on fire.....

Not bad, It's very faint though. A bit of ink would really make this pop.

kya!~^^ it's so pretty!~^^ I wanna glomp Riku and Sora~

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That's a pretty good drawing; I like how you made them look older for a better, more interesting look. (darned whiny adolecent RPG heroes... ) My only critique would be that Sora's right shoulder (to your left) looks too narrow. This would look great if it was inked and colored. I bet that You could actually run a coloring contest if with this if you inked it; I bet.

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Yes, there is no Fate for us
Only those who are swallowed by
Ignorance and fear and miss a step
Fall into the rapid river called Fate -Bleach, Volume 6

Overall, it looks pretty good. Unless it is like it in Kingdom Hearts 2, the necks look a bit elongated. However, the hair and the face look great as they look smooth, not rough. Their expressions are pleasant to look at. The zippers - they look fantastic.

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Um, i just noticed but isn't Sora's body a little out of it? I mean, well i know you messed up on the clothes but he seems a little too....funky looking..hehe sorry. i have a thing for noticing little things. great fan art tho.

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bishies are smexy....deal wit that too.
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